HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY BESTIE- So as your best friend and editor, I'ma tell you a few things I found in your third chap of IASP. One was right before Amber starts describing this new guy to Kate. It says "the bell ran", which I assume should've been "rang". Second thing was in the text Christine sent, she says she made friends with them "so if gonna join". Dunno if it autocorrected you because you tried to type "i'm" (like all lowercase) or what. Third, I found it slightly confusing where Amber (inner thoughts) says that since Christine is friends with the cheerleaders, she's not gonna be as close with her and Mya? Had that happened before or something?
Anyway, keep up the good work. You're doing great! \^0^/
