Thanks ;) I'm finding it okay. It sometimes manages to get on my nerves but what technology doesn't with me? #technologicallychallenged
I still own a flip phone. XD
Wow, thanks so much for adding "No Hands but My Own" to your reading list! I really appreciate it though I should warn you that it's still very rough at the moment... So much editing to do. -.-
Thanks ;) I'm finding it okay. It sometimes manages to get on my nerves but what technology doesn't with me? #technologicallychallenged
I still own a flip phone. XD
Hey I'm interested in critiquing your work if your willing to critique mine. :) if you get through the first chapter please try to get the second one. People who read my story are a little uncomfortable with the second chapter. But the second chapter is kind of important if u want to get to know my main character. But if u can get through the first two chapters, i hope you will like the rests. BTW i like the beginning of your story.
Hi MMP,
I'd love to but unfortunately I also use Figment and I have current obligations with someone else there. It seems like it might fall through, but between writing, reviewing, and keeping up with other responsibilities I just can't fit a new person in until it does. I hope you understand.
Thanks for the offer. ^~^
Hi MMP. Thanks for reading and commenting on the Serien Saga. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it.
On the prologue: You're absolutely right. There is absolutely no need for me to explain Sabin's backstory here. It adds nothing to the prologue. I'll work on that.
On Chapter 1: I have a glossary for the world-originated words (also character bios and maps but that's for another time..). I'm debating posting it, vs. explaining each term within the context of the story. I fear that would interrupt the story flow more than I have already have so far. :) But a glossary would give too much away too soon. I'll give it some thought.
Thanks for all of your notes and suggestions. I hope you enjoyed it and continue reading!