MysteryMPost

Thanks ;) I'm finding it okay. It sometimes manages to get on my nerves but what technology doesn't with me? #technologicallychallenged 
          	
          	I still own a flip phone. XD

Zenikoa_

Thanks for the follow (follow back?)

MysteryMPost

Follow back. ;) No problem XD
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ashton_black

Hey I'm interested in critiquing your work if your willing to critique mine. :) if you get through the first chapter please try to get the second one. People who read my story are a little uncomfortable with the second chapter. But the second chapter is kind of important if u want to get to know my main character. But if u can get through the first two chapters, i hope you will like the rests. BTW i like the beginning of your story.

bksmrtcrtkr

Hi MMP, 
          
          I'd love to but unfortunately I also use Figment and I have current obligations with someone else there. It seems like it might fall through, but between writing, reviewing, and keeping up with other responsibilities I just can't fit a new person in until it does. I hope you understand.
          
          Thanks for the offer. ^~^

rtmwriter

Hi MMP.  Thanks for reading and commenting on the Serien Saga.  I really appreciate you taking the time to read it.
          
          On the prologue: You're absolutely right.  There is absolutely no need for me to explain Sabin's backstory here.  It adds nothing to the prologue.  I'll work on that.
          
          On Chapter 1: I have a glossary for the world-originated words  (also character bios and maps but that's for another time..).  I'm debating posting it, vs. explaining each term within the context of the story.  I fear that would interrupt the story flow more than I have already have so far. :)  But a glossary would give too much away too soon.  I'll give it some thought.
          
          Thanks for all of your notes and suggestions.  I hope you enjoyed it and continue reading!