I like your stories. They have the right qualities to have the title of "mysterious"/"horror"/etc.
But I will give you my honest opinion: You write very fast. The meaning of it?
You don't describe them with detail,your movements are in speed,in one moment the character is doing something then in the other he's doing something else. It's very confusing and me as a writer or a reader to your books,it confuses me a lot and I don't understand the whole point of your story.
I would like to give you some advice,if you want sure.
