kalpimuth
https://www.wattpad.com/story/408596354?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=kalpimuth I posted 2nd chapter ❤️
Nataruska
@kalpimuth Hi there! Glad to see you keep up with your story. I was watching this video today and it fits to what i was trying to tell you the other day, about the confusion in what where the characters and their names. At minute 12:45 you can see a good example when the text is not "clean" enough for the reader. Check it out :) it might give you some pointers :))))) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bWe2Y3KNx9o&t=1s
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