Negotiator_1-1

Ladies and Gents, the prologue for my latest story is out now: Reborn as the Villainess, I'll Conquer This Kingdom with Modern Warfare
          	
          	Feel free to check it out on Wattpad and feel free to share your opinions about my story, I'd love to read all of them

airsoftal01

@Negotiator_1-1 the idea could work if well. 
          	  
          	  Ok so two things. One there is a US army tag instead of a USMC tag. Little nitpick. 
          	  
          	  Now the second thing is that the story could have worked if it was a build up, like she was secretly building up supporters, secretly building guns, armaments, things that would make it a great political thriller instead of a power fantasy like every other bog standard power fantasy fic. 
          	  
          	  Thats just my opinion as someone who has reviewed his fair share of those on youtube. (Link in my profile if your curious) 
          	  
          	  Again its not bad but just...you could have had an interesting political-military thriller is all im saying.
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OrangAsing55

@ Negotiator_1-1  ok
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Negotiator_1-1

Ladies and Gents, the prologue for my latest story is out now: Reborn as the Villainess, I'll Conquer This Kingdom with Modern Warfare
          
          Feel free to check it out on Wattpad and feel free to share your opinions about my story, I'd love to read all of them

airsoftal01

@Negotiator_1-1 the idea could work if well. 
            
            Ok so two things. One there is a US army tag instead of a USMC tag. Little nitpick. 
            
            Now the second thing is that the story could have worked if it was a build up, like she was secretly building up supporters, secretly building guns, armaments, things that would make it a great political thriller instead of a power fantasy like every other bog standard power fantasy fic. 
            
            Thats just my opinion as someone who has reviewed his fair share of those on youtube. (Link in my profile if your curious) 
            
            Again its not bad but just...you could have had an interesting political-military thriller is all im saying.
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OrangAsing55

@ Negotiator_1-1  ok
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Negotiator_1-1

Ladies and Gents, I'm slowly moving on and focusing on myself now and I feel so free without her now WHAHAHAHAA, I feel so much energy and freedom

LordShinic

@Negotiator_1-1 Why do you ask?
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LordShinic

@Negotiator_1-1 right here on Wattpad. I'm also on Reddit.
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LordShinic

@Negotiator_1-1 Yes, but I'm not very active on Discord.
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Negotiator_1-1

Story announcement:
          
          Ladies and Gentlemen I am both pleased and displeased to announce to everyone that I will be writing my first and probably only original Wattpad story that would be based off my experiences in the realm of love.
          
          It will be painful for me to write it but at the same time it would get things off my mind and to help with my current mental health status
          
          I will publish the first chapter around early October so stay tuned!

CommanderTitan2

@ Negotiator_1-1  I will, hope you're going to recover fully from your depression.
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Negotiator_1-1

this message may be offensive 
Another life update:
          
          Depression is still fucking me in the ass but I'll recover some day, I'm already jogging and going to the gym to burn memories

LordShinic

@Negotiator_1-1 Turns out memories are like calories.
            Work out enough, and they burn away like the foliage around a eucalyptus tree during a dry spell.
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