Be_verlee
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And also I saw a comment on the last chapter you updated they said sum like “Your book is too predictable, London keeps going back and they lost the whole plot and shit”.
Now I’m not saying they was right or wrong or all that shit I’m only gon speak from my perspective. While I respect their opinion, I personally see nothing wrong with the book as a matter of fact I love it. I legit keep checking my notifs everyday to see if you updated, and No your book isn’t easily predictable, not to me at least.
I never would’ve thought Michael would turn out to be a cheat and an emotionally unavailable husband right from the beginning, bc he was literally perfect and would move the heavens for her in the first book. Btw London’s reluctance to leave Michael is expected bc that’s the whole point of the book, The name of the book itself gives it away. London has all the talent, respect and fame in the world yet she finds it hard to choose herself because Michael is the one thing she can’t do without/let go hence the title “Bad habits”. Betrayal, Power imbalance, manipulation, emotional attachment and trauma bonding is a thing in the real world, lots of women have similar experiences as London so I would say your book is pretty much realistic since it throws light on real life struggles women face in their marriage. While I think the mj fandom has one of the best fanfic writers on watt-pad, I’m a bit tired of reading fanfics that portray mj as this “Flawless angel or perfect being who could no wrong” call me crazy but I also love fanfics where mj is the manipulative oneand yeah I hope you make another mj book when you’re done writing bad habits series, You’re undeniably talented and I can’t wait to read more of your books❤️I’m sorry if you any of you had a hard time reading this English isn’t my first language sorry.
Neptune11
Oh thank you so much I really appreciate but I did wanted to fix some of the writing from book 3 also if it was predictable, change it a little, but I’m still gonna keep my plot. But I am having writers block and I didn’t want to just post it. And leave yall hanging i usually like to write the whole story then post it in chunks. So that way I don’t feel bad abt my writers block but thank you so much
