Ninja_Kidx

PART 5 OF THE MELTY X READER IS OUT!

KingChange

Do you care if I take some things from your story like the scythe hero and the monster egg on melty's birthday. 

Ninja_Kidx

@KingChange sure just dont copy it too strongly please and thank you
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KingChange

@KingChange  just in my oc story like my weapon and melty's birthday
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Ninja_Kidx

Sooooo... Quick question, I know I'm not the best writer. And that's why I want some help from you epic gamer boys and girls! What can I do to make my chapters and stories better? I'll take any advice and help that I can get! 

Ikaros1066

@Ninja_Kidx yes....this pleases the chonk master
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Ninja_Kidx

@Ikaros1066 ah, okay. I've been trying to make chapters longer, the current chapter is at 800 words, and I havent gotten to the main part of the chapter yet. And for the interactions, I'll start doing a bit more of those! Thanks for the feedback
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Ikaros1066

Longer chapters if you can, but if not try and add more interactions with melty because you are pretty good with them. Add her in anything, like walking around a market or maybe she’s part of a fight scene.
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Ninja_Kidx

I'm terribly sorry that the next chapter fir the Melty x Reqder hasn't come out. My Grandma had heart issues and is still undergoing them. I will start typing in the next chapter right now.

Ninja_Kidx

@NoahJJ2344 yes I know, however I'll type when I'm not taking care of her
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NoahJJ2344

@Ninja_Kidx take your time, you don't have to pressure yourself to do it
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