NoThxx003
For those who have read the prior version of Ash Iron and Blood, what do you think of the new revised chapter?
Is the shift to 1st POV (me, myself, I) an improvement or would you rather it had stayed as 2nd POV (you, yourself)?
Feedback is appreciated.
emmalfox2009
@NoThxx003 I like the 1st person POV more tbh. I guess I'm more use to it because of other fics I've read, but basically I like the change for this fic!
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