rnbyriven
Hello! If possible, could you read the revised version of Stay Awake? Lol. It’s an adaptation, but I wrote it in my own style since I already know the story by heart. Once you’re done, could you please tell me what you think of it? Not just the plot, since it's something i don't own, but how I made the readers perceive the story overall. I’d really appreciate your honest thoughts, whether it’s good or bad. Thank you in advance, I just want to know your take on it.
