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Hi! Thank you for reading my first book. I know it’s not my best story, but I truly appreciate you taking your time to read it. I was hoping you could also check out my next one, Lines That Shouldn’t Be Crossed or I Can’t Read You, and give me your honest feedback and insights. It would really mean a lot to me. Thank you!
Hello! If possible, could you read the revised version of Stay Awake? Lol. It’s an adaptation, but I wrote it in my own style since I already know the story by heart. Once you’re done, could you please tell me what you think of it? Not just the plot, since it's something i don't own, but how I made the readers perceive the story overall. I’d really appreciate your honest thoughts, whether it’s good or bad. Thank you in advance, I just want to know your take on it.
@rnbyriven thanks for the feedback, highly appreciated it. The original book was written in another language, so i did my best to write those dialogues the best way possible in English so that you can feel the character's emotions.
@rnbyriven sorry for the late reply, maybe you won't even see it. I finished it 20 min ago. Although I like stories better where the characters are adults, this time them being basically kids didn't bother me. I don't know how much or which parts of the story are your work, but I adore the way this story portrayed emotions. The positive ones, the negative ones. The pain, the love, the grief, the heartbreak, the sorrow, the suffering, the hardships, the hope, everything. It somehow speaks to me. I think I should give a shout-out solely to you, not to whoever wrote this story originally, because every time I read YOUR books, they reach me. I think I feel what you want your readers to feel. Lisa's character was very realistic, the way she reacted after she healed, the act she put on,.. It was wrong and cruel but real. I loved Jennie's character too. It was painful to read about her final days, and about her thoughts, but they were portrayed perfectly. And I liked the supporting characters as well. I don't think you should change anything. So yeah, my favourite part about the book is the way their innermost thoughts, feelings were written. They weren't explained only superficially but profoundly. I can't get enough of that. So thank you AGAIN, for an awesome book :)
Hi I hope you support my story I just recently finished. I would appreciate you taking time to check out my profile. This means a lot. Thank you
Hi! Can check out my new story ?
