@rnbyriven sorry for the late reply, maybe you won't even see it. I finished it 20 min ago. Although I like stories better where the characters are adults, this time them being basically kids didn't bother me. I don't know how much or which parts of the story are your work, but I adore the way this story portrayed emotions. The positive ones, the negative ones. The pain, the love, the grief, the heartbreak, the sorrow, the suffering, the hardships, the hope, everything. It somehow speaks to me. I think I should give a shout-out solely to you, not to whoever wrote this story originally, because every time I read YOUR books, they reach me. I think I feel what you want your readers to feel. Lisa's character was very realistic, the way she reacted after she healed, the act she put on,.. It was wrong and cruel but real. I loved Jennie's character too. It was painful to read about her final days, and about her thoughts, but they were portrayed perfectly. And I liked the supporting characters as well. I don't think you should change anything. So yeah, my favourite part about the book is the way their innermost thoughts, feelings were written. They weren't explained only superficially but profoundly. I can't get enough of that. So thank you AGAIN, for an awesome book :)
