NotJayne

Latest TWO chapters of #justyou out now! What do you think is going to happen next? If you like what you're reading, let me know! If you spot any mistakes or suggestions, let me know! Thanks so much for reading! #obsession #obsessed #protective #toomuch #passion #sparks #chemistry #controlling #badboy #gaslighting #wrong #newadult #ditchhim #newauthor #firststory #wrongwrongwrong

NotJayne

Hello! Firstly, thank you to ALL of you who have taken the time to read #justyou! Secondly, if you have the time, I'd reallllllly appreciate it if you could like and/or comment to let me know how you think I'm doing! The more I can get people reading, the better, as I'm keen to improve this story and get some feedback on my writing style. Thank you! #obsession #obsessed #protective #toomuch #passion #sparks #chemistry #controlling #badboy #gaslighting #wrong #newadult #ditchhim #newauthor #firststory #wrongwrongwrong

NotJayne

Looking for some honest feedback for those of you who have read Just You;
          - What would you like to see happen next?
          - How are you finding the level of violence within this story? (Is it too much?)
          - What parts need to be improved?
          
          Thanks as always for your feedback and time!

NotJayne

Three more chapters of #justyou out now! They're coming thick and fast, and I'm hoping to bring this story to a close soon... let me know what you think? *Warning; these chapters contain reference to domestic violence*. Thanks for reading! #obsession #obsessed #protective #toomuch #passion #sparks #chemistry #controlling #badboy #gaslighting #wrong #newadult #knowyourworth #getrid #comeonjoey #whathappenedtojessica