who_is_this_diva42
Hello, i really liked the Season of Undoing but I feel like Korai wasn't developed as well as he could have been, I wanted to know if you would allow me to write something based off it, i would greatly appreciate it. Your work was really good, it just has potential.
OogaGhost
@who_is_this_diva42 thank you so much for that! I also realized that when I read the story all over again like a couple days ago. You're very much free to write something based off of this! I am new to writing so I'm open to comments that can help me better myself :DD
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who_is_this_diva42
@who_is_this_diva42 like I said, its amazing it just felt really surface level the way you portrayed him, it felt like he didn't develop throughout the story, im not trying to bring you down, this is only constructive criticism. I feel like you focused too much on one identity for them and that they couldn't develop. I feel as if you didn't adapt him to the AU.
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