matthieu-

hey there, patrice! your  review on one of my entries was very much appreciated. i actually checked your work WAAIH. funny because not so long ago i muttered that line when i was struck down by one of my past relationships. i melt in secrecy, in jealousy. that i instead just say, "words are all i have." 
          
          anyway, to you work, i liked how it started. it kind of drew me in because of the aforementioned backstory. but, when i read the following entries, it deviates to what you want to build on. it tackles different things and contexts as well. however, the 5th part seals the deal and gets its own back. there you continue to trudge the line again. what i could just say is, you have the potential my dear. just stick to what you want so you could be cohesive. draw two lines and trace them altogether. 
          
          much love,
          matthieu x

matthieu-

@PATORISU i'm very well enamoured, patrice. i know you could as well trudge and straighten out your line. it's part of my work to inspire people. i use my words to better means. and, i'm waiting for the day you could do the same too! happy writing! :)
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PATORISU

@matthieufaudet You're very welcome and also thank you for checking out my works. I'm sorry if the first part of my book made you travel back to your past but I bet you're one of the most wonderful people existing in this world.  I can tell because I have a sharp instinct haha :) But seriously, you deserve all of the happy things.  Everyone does. 
            
            Thank you for giving me your time to take deep thoughts about my works. I cherished and will cherish your words. Actually, you are the first one who ever noticed how my poems lack the sense of direction and that's how I want it to be because my thoughts are always lost so is my subconscious and my whole being. This book is always wet because I always cascade it with crap thoughts of mine. I'm only 17 but sometimes I wish I can stay forever in my imaginations that are too good to be true. Pushing all of my dramas aside, thank you, thank you and thank you again I can't believe that a very awesome writer like you would say that I have the potential! I will remember your advice  and I will never forget about you!
            
            Thanks for making me inspired,
            Patrice <3
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