@HaidenDeegansBtch my apologies. I've been getting a lot of hate for my work so I get really defensive quickly. I don't think you're an a-hole. Thank you for confirmation. If you'd like to help me with the story in any way, go ahead. I'm not sure how to make you an editor though
@PDhero1608 I’m not hating as I keep saying it’s great but I was giving constructive criticism I never meant to offend u or make u think I’m trying to change it I do understand it’s your book and it’s great plot I do sincerely apologize I never meant if anything came out wrong