Pasqualine16

https://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/1149060/50/25/toothless-critiques-and-editing-group-thread
          	
          	If you find yourself in need if a some editing or a honest, beneficial critique. Check out the thread attached. You won't be disappointed!
          	
          	They are insightful, helpful and will definitely boost your writing in a better direction :)

Yellow_Lemon

Pasqualine16

@NGC-224  hey :) thanks so much hey. it's a bit plain to what I was thinking of but I'll follow you for the effort
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vanitycat

Who are you and what have you done with my   Clandestine pitchfork? 

Pasqualine16

@vanitycat my profile... my rules... now be nice or die 
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vanitycat

You're just luck we are talking on your profile and not mine. My word is law there as decreed by the Lord commander of the secret sect of badgermoles. Your days are numbered! Just remember that. 
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Pasqualine16

@vanitycat glare at me all you like love but that glare won't kill me. I am innocent
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