Hey, Thank you for taking the time to read this. 

I am a 33 year old from England who never passed his English at school, my imagination was never the problem, but getting it onto paper in a legible and correct way has always held me back. I have always enjoyed writing stories and some i thought where good. 

I always lost them but enjoyed starting again. The story I am going to up load I started writing a few years ago, I have 4 chapters so far but am only happy with the first at the moment. I know everything about how this story will unfold. I can see it all in my head. 

I would like feedback if that is possible. And please bare with me.

Thank you again

Paul
(I am sure you will already see mistakes even in this ha ha)