SEANODAVID

Hey, brother! You've made such great progress on entertaining us all with your ST fic! Goodness, the quarrel between Eli and Max had  me pulling opposite ways  and it disappoints me not!
          
          Anyways, now that we seem to be halfway through the second season, I got something that I think you would enjoy for the great progress of this story! 
          
          Meet the Gomez-Kekoa family! These are a family that would debut in Season 3...
          
          The Gomez-Kekoa children:
          
          1st born: Lois Gomez-Kekoa
          Age: 18 (22 in Season 5)
          Height: 5 foot 10
          Eye color: Black
          Quirks: Skilled in javelin throw, can create flammable/explosive throwing spears, spear fishing, trained in exotic pole arms such as native Hawaiian spears and naginata
          Current occupation: Upcoming college student, Steve and Robin's coworker
          Love interest: Eddie Munson
          Actress: Courtney Eaton
          
          2nd born: Damian Gomez-Kekoa
          Age: 14 (18 in Season 5)
          Height: 5 foot 6
          Eye color: Black
          Quirks: D&D player (Level 34 Cannoneer Artificer), has a remarkable invention called Launch-It-All, a car battery powered homemade projectile cannon capable of firing objects such as eggs, potatoes, smoke cans, and more hand-sized projectiles imaginable.
          Current occupation: Junior high school student
          Love interest: Susie Henderson
          Actor: Julian Dennison
          
          3rd born: Nicolas Gomez-Kekoa
          Age: 10 (14 in Season 5)
          Height: 5 foot 5
          Eye color: Black
          Quirks: D&D player (Level 31 Deadeye Ranger), has a sneaky habit of playing with blowdarts. Can also use a Launch-It-All that Damian separately made for him. Alongside his brother, they are a formidable duet called Boom Brothers.
          Current occupation: Elementary student
          Love interest: Erica Sinclair
          Actor: Miguel Mora
          
          The Gomez-Kekoa parents:
          
          Marieta Gomez-Kekoa (played by Demi Moore)
          Jolo Gomez-Kekoa (played by Temuera Morrison)
          
          How you decide on their presence in the story is up to you...
          
          Have a great January!

PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

@SEANODAVID Yeah, but she and Dustin were singing Neverending Story 
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SEANODAVID

@PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP Sorry, typo issues hehe...
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PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

@SEANODAVID So cool. IT'S SUZIE WITH A Z.
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john28069

Elmaxaya it's a shipping name for Eleven, Max & Maya.

PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

@john28069 cool. Because it's a girl friendship 
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marvelousand2

Stranger Things(Season 2) Scene Ideas: 1. After coming home from school, Eli finds his grandfather, Elias Harrison(Chuck Norris: Guest Appearance) in the garage with what looked like a collection of guns, knives, and other types of weapons in the garage.
          
          "Grandpa, what are you doing here ?" Eli asked.
          
          "Hey, Eli. I thought I'd come for a visit. Also, I heard about the madness that happened last year. I thought I'd bring you some tools for self defense. Your siblings don't know about this yet, but I notified your parents." Elias said as he put the last of the weapons in a hidden compartment.
          
          "That's scary, but cool." Eli said.
          
          "We'll have our time together, but I've got to see your siblings first. But before I go, I've got something for you." Elias said as he pulled out movie tapes of Ghostbusters, the first two Rambo movies, the Rocky franchise, and the Planet of the Apes franchise.
          
          "Thanks. I'm going to enjoy these." Eli said taking the tapes.
          
          "Don't tell your siblings I got these for you. See ya, kid." Elias said as he exited the garage. Eli remembered why he loved spending time his grandfather. They were partners in crime.
          
          2. The Harrison Siblings, Nancy, Steve, and Jonathan went into Eli's room, they knew he was hiding something but couldn't figure out what is was, so they decided to snoop around his room. While they were searching Steve stumbled on a journal. He picked it up and looked inside and he was shocked at what he was reading.
          
          "He guys, come here." Steve said. The others came over and looked at the journal entries. It looked like mathematical and scientific research, theories, and conclusions about the Upside Down and the Monsters. They were surprised, Eli never seemed to be the nerdy and science type.
          
          "This doesn't make sense. Eli was never known for doing this. Looks like he's got more explaining to do when we see him." Jax said. He was determined to find out what secrets his brother was keeping.
          
          What do you think of these ? Any opinions ?

marvelousand2

@PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP Season 2 Scene Idea: "Come on, please explain this to us." Jax on the brink of begging, while the rest of theHarrison Siblings, Nancy, Jonathan, and Steve watched.
            
            "All right. The real reason that we moved to Hawkins was to save his life. We had no idea that the Lab would be here or Eleven would have a connection. We hoped his abilities wouldn't manifest, but it happened a long time ago." Thomas explained as he grabbed a few papers from Ellie's desk and showed it to the teens.
            
            "Look at the intelligence rate he's had since he was 8. Since then, it's been doubling, tripling, he has enough intelligence to skip more than two grades, but he holds himself back because he didn't want to be seen as different." Ellie explained. The Teens didn't know what to think at the moment.
            
            "He told you, but not us. Why didn't he trust us ?" Raelynn asked, she was hurt by the fact that Eli never told her.
            
            "It's not that he didn't trust you. He was trying to figure out how to tell you but didn't know how. He still doesn't know how till this day." Thomas said, but Maya could tell there was something else they weren't telling.
            
            "What else are you hiding?" Maya asked. Thomas and Ellie looked at each other and looked back at the teens.
            
            "I told Eli that he had lightning based abilities, but he has more than that." Ellie said.
            
            "So he could be just as powerful as Eleven?" Katie asked.
            
            "More." Thomas said with a dark expression. The Teens didn't like the look on his face.
            
            "After your grandfather saved Eli, he brought the files from the Lab with him. Eli could potentially have more than one ability, not just Lighting based abilities. It's potential, not concrete. If it was concrete, he would slowly gain his abilities over time, but we don't know yet." Ellie said. The Teens were stunned at this news, this was a lot bigger than they could imagine.
            
            "Does Eli know?" Katie asked in shock.
            
            "Yes." Thomas said looking down.
            
            What is your review and opinion on this scene ?
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PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

@marvelousand2 2. This is the moment where Eli crosses a line he can’t uncross — and the story knows it.
            
            These aren’t monsters from the Upside Down. These are humans with intent. Eli choosing lethal force here isn’t rage; it’s calculation. That’s what makes it heavy. He doesn’t snap — he decides.
            
            What’s important is why he does it: not ego, not anger, but inevitability. He recognizes that hesitation would get people he loves killed. This is him accepting responsibility rather than power. This scene works only because of the earlier restraint scenes. If Eli hadn’t been stopped before, this would feel too easy. Because he was stopped, this kill lands like a moral earthquake.
            
            The presence of Hopper matters too. Hopper represents the adult world of consequences. Eli killing in front of him silently asks: “What do you do with a kid who made the right call in the worst possible way?”
            
            MY REVIEW: Together, these scenes form a clean arc:
            
            First scene: Power almost used wrongly
            
            Second scene: Power used because there is no other option
            
            That contrast is doing serious storytelling work. Eli doesn’t become violent — he becomes burdened. And that’s the exact tone Stranger Things thrives on: kids forced to grow up too fast, paying prices adults should have paid for them.
            
            Bottom line: these scenes don’t just make Eli impressive. They make him expensive to be. And that’s how you know the character is working.
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PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

@marvelousand2 Eli isn’t hiding because he’s scared of his family. He’s hiding because adults talk and Hawkins amplifies whispers into labels. Once teachers, doctors, or officials know, control shifts away from him. Tests, programs, “special attention,” maybe even government eyes later. He’s buying time.
            
            What matters is that he plans to tell his siblings and friends. That’s trust-by-design, not secrecy. He wants the reveal to be relational, not institutional. He’s figuring out how to say: “I’m still me. I just think faster.” That hesitation is emotionally accurate and very Stranger Things. 
            
            1. This scene is doing two jobs at once, and that’s why it works.
            
            First, Eli stepping in flips the power dynamic. He’s younger, but in that moment, he’s the most dangerous person in the room. Not loud danger — contained danger. That’s a big character pivot.
            
            Second, Jax stopping him is crucial. Without Jax, Eli risks crossing from protector to weapon. Jax becomes the moral brake system — the brother who sees where this path leads and yanks the wheel before it’s too late. This is a strong scene idea because it refuses the easy win. Eli doesn’t just save the day and feel cool about it. He almost loses himself. The violence isn’t celebrated; it’s interrupted. That tells the reader the story understands the cost of power.
            
            It also reframes Steve, Nancy, and Jonathan. They’re not weak here — they’re witnesses. They see that the kid they thought they were protecting might now be protecting them. That’s unsettling in the best way.
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PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP

After so many years now, just saw another teaser! the X-MEN will be back in Avengers Doomsday!
          
          See you soon, Charles, Erik, Scott and a lot more!

207858Mh

@PaulSyrelLajarcaBROP hope to see more awesomeness
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