Peacock_Queen

The winds howled, the skies thundered with rage as the blood moon rose. Yeah thats more like it. A sinister laugh echoed, glass shattering screams filled the night, " the time will come" a calm voice spoke amongst the chaos. " Your end shall come in the form of talented man" the demon destroyed everything in its path.
          	"skilled in the art of true magic, born of the moon" all seemed lost untill a lone mage took up the fight.
          	" favored by darkness, a hero shall rise and restore" summoning all the mana he could muster, he dealt the final and fatal blow.
          	"order and peace to the realms you have corrupted"
          	After his triumph he was hailed as the wizard king. 
          	
          	And just like the, the prophecy was set in stone. 
          	
          	What do you think of the intro to my new book.

Peacock_Queen

The winds howled, the skies thundered with rage as the blood moon rose. Yeah thats more like it. A sinister laugh echoed, glass shattering screams filled the night, " the time will come" a calm voice spoke amongst the chaos. " Your end shall come in the form of talented man" the demon destroyed everything in its path.
          "skilled in the art of true magic, born of the moon" all seemed lost untill a lone mage took up the fight.
          " favored by darkness, a hero shall rise and restore" summoning all the mana he could muster, he dealt the final and fatal blow.
          "order and peace to the realms you have corrupted"
          After his triumph he was hailed as the wizard king. 
          
          And just like the, the prophecy was set in stone. 
          
          What do you think of the intro to my new book.