gojosatorunn

i love the way you described the mc in the naruto book, everything was so carefully fleshed out that i cried for her so many times ur such a talented writer

Pearldf

Hello reader, I must thank you so much for this kind comment. I’ve been working hard for this as it’s my first real project and I’m really glad that you and many others have been commenting such nice things about “The Other Survivor”. And I’ll also be publishing another story in the Naruto world which it will be called “The Moon’s Judgment”. 
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Takashiu

Wait a minute I just realized something she's allowed to legally kill him because she's part of his clan and he abandoned it and abandoned her and he's a rogue ninja that has killed Samurai from the land of iron and a few other Shinobi for his little revenge against Itachi and Danzo He has killed people unnecessarily Knowing the legal system of the leaf village it's the clan that is affected gets the judge the punishment and even if Naruto beats Sasuke she gets the decide his fate because she was more affected by this and her telling the truth about the third Hokage makes the leaf village realize they really hurt her and she's allowed to decide Sasuke's fate no matter how much Naruto bitches and moans personally I hope she puts him again Genjutsu Knowing she cares about Itachi and believes in his beliefs and core ones and follows them to the strict code no matter how much Toborama despises both clans she is super loyal to her ideals And it's the perfect way to show her suffering by the village and by Sasuke and Uchiha clan to both Naruto and him then Sasuke would actually allow himself to be taken in and judged and sentenced And it's her choosing Even if she dies I bet she left a will just for this occasion too if she almost dies so she's a spiteful person and I like it it makes so much sense too Naruto is an idiot He never focused on her always focused on Sasuke not the people around him who had the harshest life imaginable compared to him hers was pretty much hell on earth his was walking a park He got to adapt on it she got to live everyday from the clan to the village looking at her and waiting to use her as a weapon And she's sick of it and hates it p

delphistrawberryfarm

Omg that’s such a good idea! 
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Takashiu

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I feel like the strike is not going to be a sword in the gut it's going to be a fucking ginjutsu because we don't get what she had to go through in the Ambu Black ops and why she followed Itachi's will so fanatically and belief like because she stayed by the village's side even though she hates it it proves one thing she is loyal to not the village but Itachi so Sasuke not losing an arm in this fight with Naruto makes so much sense of what he's about to go through with her and I bet she's going out to do it the same to Naruto knowing his weakness is Genjutsu because she is done being someone's puppet or doll she is unfiltered and deep change because it felt like she just yelled out everything the third Hokage did wrong to the public and everyone knows it now The professor is not viewed as a good person anymore but a terrible man like danzo so I can't wait for her to put him into the same thing Itachi put through Sasuke because he was being generous she's going to make sure he can't escape through it so he gets to witness every single inch of it because it's not revenge it's a reckoning and wrath In the perfect execution is not to kill the opponent it's two physically drain them of facing reality of what the other person had to go through for them

BlueStar754863

Hi @Pearldf
          One question would Tomoe’s story will continue in Naruto Next Generations.
          Who would Tomoe end up with and Will she have children in future.

Pearldf

Hello @BlueStar754863
            No, sadly I don’t think I will continue Tomoe’s story in Naruto Next Generation. Honestly it’s mostly because I’m not a fan of it. 
            And for the rest, it’s a secret  
            Thank you for commenting, I appreciate it.
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Takashiu

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I have to answer the question is your OC right now in the Naruto fanfiction a fucking clone because I know she went separate ways with Gaara and Naruto to find Itachi and she saved neji and there are a far distance away from them so I like to answer the question is Madara Uchiha going to be pissed off that he is fighting a clone of her that has the same skill set as him on that level even though she has no special abilities like him an equal footing I'm clone let me phrase that again a clone is fighting Madara as an equal and tell you the truth I bet Naruto's going to be a little pissed because he didn't realize it he got fooled by his own jutsu!! 

Pearldf

@Takashiu the chapter is out! 
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Takashiu

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@Pearldf I don't but I do at the same time if she is literally pulling a Shadow clone and it's the biggest joke of the century because Toborama madara's greatest enemy did that before and I am in my mind that would piss off Madara to extreme because she is using the second Hokage way of thinking against him The best way to fight an enemy is become what the enemy hates the most and personally it's funny as fuck that would give anyone a chuckle and I definitely if the clone loses she's going to laugh because Madara is going to be angry at her for playing that game
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Pearldf

The next chapter will maybe published in like a few hours or tomorrow. It’s up to you reader! 
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