CosmosPheonix

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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 Well done! You should have Atem change back after the zombies are gone and from pain of his wounds
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PhatPandaPo23

@CosmosPheonix hey here’s a new bit.
            
            Yugi press herself against Chestnut’s neck as they flew through the wild foliage jumping over fallen trees and ducking low branches. Unfortunately, these things did little to slow down the skeletons as one threw a spear at the young maiden, which luckily she had acted quickly enough and evaded it by a hair. However her luck quickly turned when the zombies cut off their path!
            
            Chestnut reared back once again and this time Yugi tumbled off her back and the reigns tangled up in the branches. Yugi swiftly gotten back up on her feet and grabbed a fallen thick branch and held it like a weapon. One of the skeletons lunges at her but soon had its head set flying when Yugi swung the branch at it. Chestnut sent two zombies into a tree with a kick from her hind legs. The young maiden and her horse company managed to keep the horde at bay for a bit. That was until one of the zombies Yugi wildly swung at sliced the branch in half with their sword. Even worse another on grabbed her and pinned her down.
            
            “Let go of me!” She yelled struggling with the zombie. The skeleton ignored her struggles and held her down while another skeleton approached with a sword in hand. When it reached them Yugi stared up into the other zombie’s empty eye sockets as it slowly raises its sword to stab and kill her. Closing her eyes tightly, Yugi screamed at the top of her lungs. “HELP ME!!” 
            
            Surprisingly the blow never came and the weight of the zombie pinning her was roughly pulled off her. The tricolor maiden slowly opened her eyes and was greeted by the sight of a black and red scale body. The pharaoh, still fully dragon, stood before the horde of zombies, his body coiled protectively around the young maiden. Yugi was surprise and bewildered, the pharaoh had come to save her?
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PhatPandaPo23

@CosmosPheonix thanks. Now I just need to figure out how I should do the chase scene.
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0032246498a

could you do a remake on the last unicorn?

0032246498a

I think it deserves a bit of spelling changes or a remake of the original story. y'know, an anniversary thing of sorts
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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 I didn't find a problem with it.
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FiveChosen

Hello again, and thanks for uploading the Pink Merhog and the Blue Naga story!  Remember the original story of how we meet Shadow after Maria sacrificed herself in order to get him out of the ARK?  Well, how about a reference to that scene for the climax?
          
           — Quick summary: after the submarine is built, and the crew goes underwater with Amy and Maria swimming in merhog forms, they unlock the door to the underwater cave, but cannot get through a gold door into the pirates' hideout. However, Whisker, being extremely dim-witted, inadvertently tells them that they must align the symbols on the door and that there are three markers on separate islands giving clues as to do this; but when the pirate leaves, Scourge attacks the gang and takes Maria prisoner when she sacrifices herself to save Shadow.  Determined to get her back, he and Sonic collect more Materials, and after finding the three markers on hidden islands, Sonic, Tails, and Blaze tell Marine to stay at Southern Island, as the upcoming battle with the pirates will be more dangerous than any challenge they've faced so far. Marine insists that she goes with them, and finally losing patience with her, Shadow and Blaze yell at her, calling her a nuisance.
          

FiveChosen

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Lilli_0161

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Lilli_0161

@ Lilli0161  thanks 
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PhatPandaPo23

@Lilli0161 Thank you for the new chapter and it was nicely done.
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