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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 The murals coming to life was a nice touch!
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PhatPandaPo23

@CosmosPheonix hey I decided to rewrite the little of that bit before but also show a new bit.
            
            “Don’t believe me? Ask the dishes.”
            
            To the young maiden’s amazement the dishes began magically floating into the air twirling and dancing in a choreograph way right before her eyes, singing in perfect harmony with Mana, who twirled around and around with the dishes, before the dishes formed a pyramid out of themselves.
            
            “They can sing, they can dance. After, Miss, this Egypt. And a dinner here is never second best.”
            
            Then a dozen menus flew into the room and fluttered around Yugi, who caught one and glanced at all the choices written on it. Before setting it down as the young magician gain her attention again.
            
            “Go on, unfold your menu. Take a glance and then you’ll. Be our guest. Oui, our guest. Be guest.”
            
            The blonde then dance away before stopping in the middle of the table. The chandelier spotlight focus back on her as she called out the items that were boast about on the menu.
            
            “Beef ragout, cheese soufflé, pie and pudding ‘en flambé’”
            
            To the young maiden’s shock and amusement that last dish exploded right after appearing and splattered onto Marik, who was standing close by it, with a fish head smashing into his face. Yugi failed to hold back her giggles as the purple falcon marched off back to the kitchen into clean himself up. Mana felt bad for him, but continued on with the show, twirling her staff and dance with the wine glasses.
            
            “We’ll prepare and serve with flair, a culinary cabaret. You’re alone and you’re scared, but the banquet’s all prepared.”
            
            At those words an entire banquet of food with large and small plates of outstanding cuisine appeared covering the whole table. Then Mana pointed her staff to the picture murals on the walls and they magically came to life.
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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 And this was a good start
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0032246498a

could you do a remake on the last unicorn?

0032246498a

I think it deserves a bit of spelling changes or a remake of the original story. y'know, an anniversary thing of sorts
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0032246498a

@PhatPandaPo23 same
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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 I didn't find a problem with it.
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FiveChosen

Hello again, and thanks for uploading the Pink Merhog and the Blue Naga story!  Remember the original story of how we meet Shadow after Maria sacrificed herself in order to get him out of the ARK?  Well, how about a reference to that scene for the climax?
          
           — Quick summary: after the submarine is built, and the crew goes underwater with Amy and Maria swimming in merhog forms, they unlock the door to the underwater cave, but cannot get through a gold door into the pirates' hideout. However, Whisker, being extremely dim-witted, inadvertently tells them that they must align the symbols on the door and that there are three markers on separate islands giving clues as to do this; but when the pirate leaves, Scourge attacks the gang and takes Maria prisoner when she sacrifices herself to save Shadow.  Determined to get her back, he and Sonic collect more Materials, and after finding the three markers on hidden islands, Sonic, Tails, and Blaze tell Marine to stay at Southern Island, as the upcoming battle with the pirates will be more dangerous than any challenge they've faced so far. Marine insists that she goes with them, and finally losing patience with her, Shadow and Blaze yell at her, calling her a nuisance.

FiveChosen

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Lilli_0161

thanks for following me

PhatPandaPo23

@Lilli0161 your welcome
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Lilli_0161

@ Lilli0161  thanks
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PhatPandaPo23

@Lilli0161 Thank you for the new chapter and it was nicely done.
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