CosmosPheonix

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CosmosPheonix

@PhatPandaPo23 Well done! I like how you explained the bandits.
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PhatPandaPo23

“Listen well  humans as I am offering you a deal that will make sure your village and others will be protected from these bandits and any future threats. I will give you some DiaDhanks that will allow you to summon duel monsters that can help you protect your village and the others from any more attacks. “The pharaoh then held up one finger. “However, this deal isn’t free I want something in exchange.”
            
            “W-What do you want?”
            
            The pharaoh looked him dead in the eyes. “A bride.”
            
            The trio stared open-mouth, not sure what they heard was right. “A-A what!?”
            
            “You heard me, in exchange for my help, I want a bride.”
            
            
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PhatPandaPo23

@CosmosPheonix okay here’s what I got so far.
            
            The dragon then turn back to the three men trapped in the goblin’s hold. “It seems Thoth had bless you three enough to save you.” Then he pointed to Raphael. “You, the one called Raphael. Explain why you and your companions were out in this storm and I might spare you.”
            
            “Y-Yes sir.” answered the blonde. “As I was just explaining, my companions and I were trying to return home after weeks of failing to finding any help against a terrible threat to ours and neighboring villages.”
            
            “And what plight has befallen your village as well as others that would require you to travel far from home in search of help?” 
            
            “Bandits your majesty, but they’re not like ordinary bandits they’re mysterious. Dressed in black robes, amor, and cloaks, their hoods always drawn over their heads casting their faces in shadows and never seen, and most disturbing of all is their eyes which glow red like demons out hunting. These Shadow bandits attack during the night at any village they chose in the region terrorizing and wreaking havoc before disappearing without a trace as dawn approaches. They’ve been plaguing the region since the beginning of planting season, if nothing is done to stop these attacks soon I fear the worst for mine and other villages. We tried getting help in the city, unfortunately we couldn’t find any and after weeks of failing we were force to return home. More misfortune soon followed along our journey back as we ended up lost in the rainstorm and had to find shelter, the rest you know.”
            
            “That definitely is a problem, one that I can easily help you solve.”
            
            “Huh!?”
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0032246498a

could you do a remake on the last unicorn?

PhatPandaPo23

Really. It was my first fanfiction story I did.
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CosmosPheonix

@0032246498a I didn't think it was bad.
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PhatPandaPo23

Do a remake of the last unicorn? Was it that bad?
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FiveChosen

Hello again, and thanks for uploading the Pink Merhog and the Blue Naga story!  Remember the original story of how we meet Shadow after Maria sacrificed herself in order to get him out of the ARK?  Well, how about a reference to that scene for the climax?
          
           — Quick summary: after the submarine is built, and the crew goes underwater with Amy and Maria swimming in merhog forms, they unlock the door to the underwater cave, but cannot get through a gold door into the pirates' hideout. However, Whisker, being extremely dim-witted, inadvertently tells them that they must align the symbols on the door and that there are three markers on separate islands giving clues as to do this; but when the pirate leaves, Scourge attacks the gang and takes Maria prisoner when she sacrifices herself to save Shadow.  Determined to get her back, he and Sonic collect more Materials, and after finding the three markers on hidden islands, Sonic, Tails, and Blaze tell Marine to stay at Southern Island, as the upcoming battle with the pirates will be more dangerous than any challenge they've faced so far. Marine insists that she goes with them, and finally losing patience with her, Shadow and Blaze yell at her, calling her a nuisance.
          

FiveChosen

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Lilli_0161

thanks for following me 

Lilli_0161

@ Lilli0161  thanks 
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PhatPandaPo23

@Lilli0161 Thank you for the new chapter and it was nicely done.
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