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PhennDragon
Apr 11, 2024 08:20AM
So by now, there's 3 parts. I need feedback, pretty please, if i'm to keep posting chapters. Just small suggestions, comments, or whatever. I'm open to any constructive critique.View all Conversations
Story by Phenn Dragon
The Guardian
Religious Fiction... but not preachy
Rachel Greenwood was your typical teenager... until she died.
Now, task...