PhennDragon

So by now, there's 3 parts. I need feedback, pretty please, if i'm to keep posting chapters. Just small suggestions, comments, or whatever. I'm open to any constructive critique.

PhennDragon

So... there is the tentative prologue to The Guardian... please let me know what could be changed, what SHOULD be changed, and if you'd want more... 
          Does it intrigue you, at least?
          I just published "Prologue " of my story "The Guardian ". https://www.wattpad.com/1435864539?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=LisaGroenewald