Sofiacraftstories135
Hey, I read your story based on mine!
I love the way you set in the atmosphere like that. It's a good tactic to book readers in. It lets them picture the scene more easily and makes the story seem more interesting.
Akira
Pheonixlair
Thank you! It's my first proper book so I'm still learning how to make charectars interact well and charectar development, so I'm mainly good at descriptive words but I'm going to try improving things I'm not that good at.
<3
Autumn :3