Philthelove

I'm currently in revision mode for a full-length manuscript, but in the meantime came up with an opening chapter for another potential project, working title is "The Queen of Clubs." 
          	
          	Here's the blurb: Declan's life unravels as his father lies on his deathbed and his grandmother's nursing home faces a buyout. This small, enchanting home, with its unique garden, holds more secrets than he ever imagined. Strange occurrences plague the grounds: a mysterious girl appears and vanishes, dark roots spread ominously, and eerie playing cards show up everywhere, warning of danger.
          	
          	Determined to uncover the truth, Declan discovers the residents are exiled royals from another world, his grandmother their hidden queen. They guard a portal and shield their kingdom from a creeping darkness, held back only by the queen's magical ring. With the elderly guardians unable to fight, Declan must conquer his insecurities, venture into the unknown world, and retrieve the ring's twin. This daring quest is his only chance to banish the evil wizard and save both realms.
          	
          	Would love to hear your thoughts, keeping in mind it's still in early draft form and I only have one chapter written. 
          	
          	Many thanks and all the best!

Philthelove

I'm currently in revision mode for a full-length manuscript, but in the meantime came up with an opening chapter for another potential project, working title is "The Queen of Clubs." 
          
          Here's the blurb: Declan's life unravels as his father lies on his deathbed and his grandmother's nursing home faces a buyout. This small, enchanting home, with its unique garden, holds more secrets than he ever imagined. Strange occurrences plague the grounds: a mysterious girl appears and vanishes, dark roots spread ominously, and eerie playing cards show up everywhere, warning of danger.
          
          Determined to uncover the truth, Declan discovers the residents are exiled royals from another world, his grandmother their hidden queen. They guard a portal and shield their kingdom from a creeping darkness, held back only by the queen's magical ring. With the elderly guardians unable to fight, Declan must conquer his insecurities, venture into the unknown world, and retrieve the ring's twin. This daring quest is his only chance to banish the evil wizard and save both realms.
          
          Would love to hear your thoughts, keeping in mind it's still in early draft form and I only have one chapter written. 
          
          Many thanks and all the best!

Philthelove

Woo hoo! I finally wrote something for the first time in quite a while. Check out chapter one of "Devils of a Mind" (https://www.wattpad.com/1152016390-devils-of-a-mind-chapter-one). Big thanks to @esobol for her constant beta reads and guidance.
          
          After a whole year studying magic with the elder magi at Castle Ire, Esmond Deadmane still has little to show for it. If he wants to bring his love back from the dead, it's time to be drastic. 
          
          He steals one of the three most powerful books in the library and flees toward the Whispering Wood to hide. But when a strange entity appears with great powers and offers to help, he wonders if he really has made a new friend, or if the book has brought him more trouble than its worth.

JW_Evans

Hi! Thanks for giving me your honest opinion on my story, SOULKEEPER. I thought to read your comments before bed, so that I could sleep on them. 
          
          I hope I can keep your interest as a reader, despite the shortcomings of my storytelling. Your perspective has really shown me that I still have a lot to learn as a writer. 
          
          Have a nice day!

JW_Evans

@JW_Evans Don’t think about it! You’re very much welcome.
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Philthelove

@JW_Evans Much appreciated. No rush at all. My #1 goal is just to write right now. With four little ones and a full-time job, it gets tricky to find time. I think this go around I have a better grasp of hitting my "beats" and driving the conflict through character movement--have done a lot of self study over the years when I haven't been writing--so I'd be interested in feedback on how that's playing out. Thanks again!
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JW_Evans

@JW_Evans Sure! I’d love to check out your WIP and, maybe, leave some feedback if you’d like. Novel writing is something else, that’s for sure. It’s a really big undertaking. I’d be happy to reciprocate what you’ve taken the time to do for me.
            
            I hope for the best you and your stories!
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Cross-Warrior

Thanks so much for adding The Dragon's Scale to your reading list! I hope you enjoy/enjoyed it ^.^

Cross-Warrior

@Philthelove I hope that proves to be true :D
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Philthelove

@Cross-Warrior  Thanks, Cross. Was on Elena Iaza's list of recommendations, so I know it must be good. Can't wait!
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