Pikpixel
New chapter of "The Others" coming soon. Wanted to get it out last night with the rest of the books but couldn't :/
Pikpixel
fainting11
Hi. It's me. I was hoping you could give me some feedback on my books. Thanks.
Pikpixel
@fainting11 yeah sure. Your last chapter of the assassin ended very abruptly. This is a thing that shows up a lot on you books. Try and make smoother transitions and dont publish a chapter until you have a good stopping point.
fainting11
Are you going to put apple princess on here?