Phillippa Wharmby-Hancock

For anyone reading The King's Ranger | Fallen, you may have noticed that I've removed chapter 4 and onwards. Don't worry, they will be coming back; I've actually almost finished writing the book, once I've done I'll be editing and rewriting the chapters then posting them on a weekly to fortnightly basis. The reason I'll be doing this is because it was making me cringe knowing that you were reading such poor writing and knowing that I'd posted the raw versions of my writing in the first place.

Happy new year, folks! May this year be better than last year

Updates/rewrites for chapters Two and Three are up now! Enjoy.
          As with Chapter One, they are be and improved and so much better than the old ones. Give me your opinions, and happy reading!

The rewrite of the first chapter for The King's Ranger has been uploaded to replace the old one, so go ahead and check it out. I hope you enjoyed it. Don't hold back from telling me what you think of it - opinions and creative criticisms are always welcome.
          There won't be any new chapters released next Saturday either as that's my birthday, but I'll be sure to try and upload rewrites in order to improve your experiences. The rewrites for chapters two and three will be published together as they won't make sense once the changes have been made for Two.

@ZebaAlmas my bad, I got fantasy and fiction confused

Im thrilled you want to help me improve Bedding Camp. 
          All you have to do is pick a chapter and ill send you a link with the text. You clean up the grammar, punctuation and tense as best you can and send it back to me and ill replace the original with the one you fixed and in it ill give you and one of your books a shout out.