PixelNate19

Hey everyone, PixelNate19 here!
          	So, as most of you probably know, my very first fanfic was a Quintessential Quintuplets story. Right now, I’m working on a complete re-write of that project, which I’ve titled Quintessential Shadows.
          	
          	Now, here’s where I’d like your input: In the original version, I included several fight scenes that gave the story a darker and more action-oriented tone compared to the source material. As I’m re-writing, I’m debating whether to keep all of those fights in this new version and let the action-heavy elements continue, or to tone them down and focus more on the romance, drama, and slice-of-life aspects.
          	
          	Personally, I feel like the fights added an extra layer of tension and gave the characters opportunities to grow in unique ways outside of the usual school and relationship setting. At the same time, I don’t want the action to overshadow the heart of the story, which is still about the bonds between Futaro, the Quints, and the OC characters.
          	
          	So my question to you all is this: Would you like me to continue keeping the fights in Quintessential Shadows, or would you prefer a version that leans more toward the original anime’s style with less action?
          	
          	Your feedback means a lot, since this rewrite is not just about improving the story, but also about shaping it into something you all will enjoy even more.

SithLordSpider-man

Oof, that is hard to decide. What I recommend is balance both. Not ever chapter should be fight ones. For example, one chapter could be about the Quints and slice of life. Another, focusing on fighting. And, you could mix them in together. Take it from the guy who wrote a superhero in the story, some things should balance out, a chapter could be dark and intense, another laughter and calm. Whatever you decide is up to you.
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PixelNate19

@AJmous Yeah, I'll do that. Thanks for giving me the idea to Announce about it and asking about my Story. Really appreciate it. If you have some idea, do share it.
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PixelNate19

@MetalKnightStar Kay, I suck at balancing two thing's but I'll do that.
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Davz007

One question: will you continue with the story of Eclipse Horizon? It seems like it's on hiatus in a very strange way, I don't want to rush you, everyone has their own time.

Davz007

@PixelNate19 I understand, I really hope that when you have much more time.
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PixelNate19

@Davz007 Yeah, I'm going to continue it but I'm having problems in my school life so I'm unable to publish new chapters.
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PixelNate19

Hey everyone, PixelNate19 here!
          So, as most of you probably know, my very first fanfic was a Quintessential Quintuplets story. Right now, I’m working on a complete re-write of that project, which I’ve titled Quintessential Shadows.
          
          Now, here’s where I’d like your input: In the original version, I included several fight scenes that gave the story a darker and more action-oriented tone compared to the source material. As I’m re-writing, I’m debating whether to keep all of those fights in this new version and let the action-heavy elements continue, or to tone them down and focus more on the romance, drama, and slice-of-life aspects.
          
          Personally, I feel like the fights added an extra layer of tension and gave the characters opportunities to grow in unique ways outside of the usual school and relationship setting. At the same time, I don’t want the action to overshadow the heart of the story, which is still about the bonds between Futaro, the Quints, and the OC characters.
          
          So my question to you all is this: Would you like me to continue keeping the fights in Quintessential Shadows, or would you prefer a version that leans more toward the original anime’s style with less action?
          
          Your feedback means a lot, since this rewrite is not just about improving the story, but also about shaping it into something you all will enjoy even more.

SithLordSpider-man

Oof, that is hard to decide. What I recommend is balance both. Not ever chapter should be fight ones. For example, one chapter could be about the Quints and slice of life. Another, focusing on fighting. And, you could mix them in together. Take it from the guy who wrote a superhero in the story, some things should balance out, a chapter could be dark and intense, another laughter and calm. Whatever you decide is up to you.
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PixelNate19

@AJmous Yeah, I'll do that. Thanks for giving me the idea to Announce about it and asking about my Story. Really appreciate it. If you have some idea, do share it.
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PixelNate19

@MetalKnightStar Kay, I suck at balancing two thing's but I'll do that.
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Ahmedchagroune

Why don't you write a story about the character of the anime and manga Nisekoi, as it is one of the oldest and most famous romantic anime and manga from the year 2014. I noticed that there are not many stories for it on Wattpad despite its fame. This is a comment that I hope you see. Your next story will be about this anime. Continue. I support you.

PixelNate19

Soooooooooo Hey...... It's the Author of Quintessential Shadows, OtakuFanatic19, don't know if anyone is even going to read this but if there are people reading it, stay right there i have some important thing's to discuss right now.
          
          As I've said before the only source material of my story Quintessential Shadows is gone now which was the Manga but now the Website from where I read Manga is gone so it's hard for me to write now although I still have enough ideas to write atleast 5-6 more chapters which would not focus on either the Anime nor Manga.
          
          But the thing is that I've decided to take some breaks from writting cause I've been frequently active on Wattpad now which is kind of affecting my Studies so i wanna focus on it.
          
          So for atleast 1 or 2 month's I won't Publish any new chapters of Either Quintessential Shadows or Quintessential Sinnoh Journey.

AJmous

@OtakuFanatic19 Dang it man.. It's okay. I will wait for your return. I'm just hoping that you will not quit. Your story is an absolute masterpiece. Take your time and come back stronger.
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issac0023

Why did you delete chapter 3 of Poke-quintuplet? I was about to read it a few weeks ago but then it's gone.

PixelNate19

@issac0023 Sorry about the delay i really forgot about it but you can read Chapter 3 now cuz it's finally Out
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issac0023

@OtakuFanatic19 I haven't seen chapter 3 published yet.
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PixelNate19

@issac0023 Sorry about that, I just thought that there was something that needs to be adjusted so i Unpublished that Chapter, but don't worry I'll publish it today
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marylin022

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