@PoisonNShadoW
After a lot of thought, my hoi4 story seems too fanfic-y, and will undergo corrections, especially on the prose and making it look like the screenplay of a movie instead of the reader's imagination.
It's more on the consistency though so it might get back up in like an hour or something depending if I'm lazy or not.
Poison, did you made another story of Armed Enlightenment?
Hello there
Btw, I'm rewriting my hoi4 story. It's still up. You'll just see a notice on the first part of each chapter on whether I edited it or not. Beware of inconsistencies on those I haven't edited yet.
A third rewrite huh, take as much time as you need because I very much love what you’ve done what this story and trust your creative judgment.
On the other hand, I felt that the latest chapters (more specifically the forest chase arc, can’t remember the specific chapter) felt harder to follow compared to previous chapters. I’m not sure whether it was just me or maybe I was just tired when I read those chapters but some of the paragraphs felt harder to visualise in my head when comprehending the narrative.
I’m not sure if I mentioned this on the chapter itself I just thought you should know since you’re about to commit to another rewrite.
Honestly guys, this is getting goofy. And it's not goofy as in spitting god in the face and slapping his ass, and asking to comment, like, and subscribe anyways. It's just outright libel considering I am just one person out of many that decided to give a piece of my mind.
Lockheed Henesy has begun posting about me again. Funnily enough, he keeps on whining about 1-year-old drama when it was HIM who kickstarted it recently. It's funny because he just recently discovered the reddit post I made last year covering his antics, and that's what started triggering him again.
I even stated in the post that "I am not attacking his book. I am attacking his immature behavior of muting people because of criticism."
So if you think about it, he just shot the journalist.
Link for those curious: https://www.reddit.com/r/nihonkoku_shoukan/comments/szzwj2/guy_fails_the_most_basic_fundamentals_of_writing/
@PoisonNShadoW I mean I can’t even read his stories as the grammar is horrible and hurts my head head trying to read,
@PoisonNShadoW *que the clown music* https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NNv2RHR62Rs&pp=ygULY2xvd24gbXVzaWM%3D
@AllHailThe99th he already blocked me. It’s just him going “mimimimimi” because I believed in him.
To commemorate SSSniperwolf doxxing Jacksfilms, in six days marks the 2 month anniversary of Lockheed Henesy's public declaration of reporting me for bullying without evidence after I scolded him for using his late father's death to justify publicly revealing people he banned to his 1.1k followers many months after the incident.
After his Summoning Osea got taken down for plagiarism, instead of reflecting, he did not bother to make an appeal to Wattpad. He, in his delusion, thinks it was taken down because of a hit squad from a discord about Japan getting isekai'd because Wattpad cannot moderate thousands of books 24/7 and reference it to a thousand other printed books.
Based on his behavior, he did not bother to make an appeal on what is essentially a legal issue for Wattpad. If he played his cards right, he could win in Court. But no. He chose to grumble and single me out for scolding him. I was accused for something so painful and intimate to its core because I was punishing the son for desecrating the late father's name.
I saw how my mother cried. I know how hard it'll be. Fuck him.
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@PoisonNShadoW If I was around when it happened, I don’t remember it. But the dude sounds like he needs to have a mental evaluation.
@PoisonNShadoW Even I've said some stuff online that I've come to regret because of some shit going on in my personal life, but I'm not delusional. That guy sounds like he needs to touch grass and go out.
It has come to my attention that a user going by the name of Lockheedhenesy has falsely reported me for an incident in February 2022 that led to his notoriety, beginning with him blocking people and posting their names in two chapters containing screenshots for criticizing his story, Summoning Osea. (Pulled from Wattpad because of plagiarism by using multiple pages of the manga Japan Summons)
Let me tell you why this is bad. He exposed users that he blocked to the public, which could easily be used to harass, defame, and slander them. And he's now doing that to me.
It has been a full year already. The people he offended have long gone, and I had to wake up seeing my name singled out despite telling him nicely that what he did was wrong and petty. Like the rest, I was among those he blocked. Instead of discussing it, he ran away. He even had the gall to say my days are numbered despite the actions that have incited many others, not just me, from taking action from his behavior.
It was no longer about his story. I've always been a believer that there is no bad story, only bad authors. But from this incident, his behavior? This is unforgivable.
In 2022, many people took to his Conversations to voice out the actions he committed. But it was all futile. By the time he went active, he began on a blocking spree and deleted every single one of our comments admonishing his behavior. He's 28 based on what information was found in his Conversations. He should know better than that. He even used his dead dad to justify his behavior. In the aftermath he branded himself the victim and got away with it.
Below is a link to a Reddit post containing a bit of context and the discussion surrounding it. As I said again, he deleted many of the posts. If I receive screenshots from the people who were there, I will give you an update here.
https://www.reddit.com/r/nihonkoku_shoukan/comments/szzwj2/guy_fails_the_most_basic_fundamentals_of_writing/
@PoisonNShadoW Oh that mf DMd me once that I added his story to my list. Don't like him as much anymore.
@PoisonNShadoW well gotta say you're handling this way better than whatever they're doing. Stay strong.
Mobile app is shit. Can’t even tell if I left or published the story by accident
@VolticCloud Now I can't open a person's profile from comments in a fanfic unless it has a reply addressed to them with their at symbol, which sucks since that slows down how I gain followers.
@AllHailThe99th I get ya......recently I can't even open a paragraph comment reply directly. I'm forced to manually retrace it.
I need advices in making a book similar in yours but more on kinda detailed can you help me?
And read actually published stories. Imitate their style rather than basing it on wattpad stories where people recite the full intro of Avatar The Last Airbender before actually starting out a chapter, mute people for pointing out their flaws and justify their behavior by bringing up their dead dad, and and use a doorbell sound effect from youtube rather than saying “the doorbell chimed.”
@RhineRine your first story is most likely going to be shit. If you understand that, work through it. Get grammarly, understand human interaction if you want romance, recite the dialogues of your characters (if it’s weird, cut it out and put something normal unless you’re doing medieval), and most of all, DO NOT RELY ON COMMENTS. You’re going to receive comments like “Good chapter” and the like. That’s a confirmation bias originating from literal monkeys who only read through walls of texts rather than the meaning of each word.
You alive?
@PoisonNShadoW Completely makes sense and is very much understandable please have a good day.
@No_u_1o1 refer to my description before being a complete and unnecessary bother that implies the impatience of a wide audience such as yourself on my individual freedom of deciding when I write and piblish
