Logic over bullshit. Criticism is not an insult - it is progress. When they call your story a masterpiece, doubt. They are SUBJECTIVE. Find the flaws. 

I write mostly military-themed stories for fun, improve my creative writing as I go, and practice writing styles.
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  • JoinedAugust 9, 2019
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PoisonNShadoW PoisonNShadoW Sep 05, 2024 01:17PM 
After a lot of thought, my hoi4 story seems too fanfic-y, and will undergo corrections, especially on the prose and making it look like the screenplay of a movie instead of the reader's imagination....
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Stories by PoisonShadow
  • 8 Published Stories
Hearts of Iron 4 Player's Guide to Save the Isekai World by PoisonNShadoW
Hearts of Iron 4 Player's Guide to...
Erich Kasper was supposed to be dead, but the Kingdom of Cascadia thought otherwise in instituting the dawn o...
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Armed Enlightenment V2 by PoisonNShadoW
Armed Enlightenment V2
The sun has set on the land of Gorvalia. An existence similar and mortal as their own has appeared that will...
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Consequence of Power - Modern Weapons Cheat In Another World Kai by PoisonNShadoW
Consequence of Power - Modern Weap...
Nagato Kazuya had it in for him with a stray bullet from heaven. Now he gets a chance for a redo with hazard...
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