Porkpye_JB

Very good! While I am not the best to give an opinion on the romance aspect, I can say that the sci-fi elements are done very well. You do a very nice job of communicating the emotions of the characters, but I would suggest that you edit the chapter titles slightly so a reader knows going in whose POV they are seeing from. For instance, I would rename the chapter 'Awakening' to 'Angela: Awakening'. It gives both relevant information and individuality to the title.

Porkpye_JB

Very good! While I am not the best to give an opinion on the romance aspect, I can say that the sci-fi elements are done very well. You do a very nice job of communicating the emotions of the characters, but I would suggest that you edit the chapter titles slightly so a reader knows going in whose POV they are seeing from. For instance, I would rename the chapter 'Awakening' to 'Angela: Awakening'. It gives both relevant information and individuality to the title.

lindushi18

Hi there! Welcome to wattpad! You have published so many stories already! well done! 
          If you are looking for something new to read, I yould love to have your opinion on my stories! It would mean a lot to me! 
          If ou want me to return the favour, please let me know! Thanks