Hey everyone. 

About me? Hmm? Let's just say I love super sentai. I will love to read any story that involves sentais or even power rangers. 

If I see some problems with your writing I will tell you. ONLY to help you. 

Let's get the facts straight......lol 

Writing that drives me crazy!!!

He jumped over the fence. Mr Carter started the car.  (What?) 

They stood up. They walked out. Mary is scared. (Sigh) people seriously.

(And then you wonder why your story has so many reads but it lacks in votes. Come on, fix your grammar and the description of the story.)

And it's not about being harsh it's about being honest. Do you want me to lie and say you've done a great job instead of helping you become better with your writing.