I'm a mediocre writer hoping to get better so I'll probably end up reading a lot more work from different people. Constructive criticism is always welcome. I did say constructive criticism not
"I don't like it, it sux".
That's fine just, why? What could I have done better, What part did you not like, was it my grammar or limited vocabulary hence my lack of description?! Is it me! My self-esteem is at the bottom of the floor oh god why!!
*Ahem*
Give me something to work with pls!! Other than that I game and watch tv, a lot. Just a shut-in. Enjoy!
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PrinnyHDood
Apr 20, 2025 08:42PM
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