PunkShifts2099

Recently, I made Chapter 6 of Jay and Pax, but due to it being rushed, I'm going to re-work it later. Chapter 7 should be out by the end of the week, and the updated version of Chapter 6 will be out a little while later. It will be quite different as I had run into an "author's block", but rest assured, it shall be better. If there is anything I should not change, let me know. However, some things will not change. They'll go to the diner, the conversation with Marcus WILL happen, but not on those regards. The park scene will be removed, and there will be more details. Sometimes, you just need to remember why you're writing a book. For me, I was doing it to express my little space and big side through Jay and Pax. I hope everyone will remember why they do the things they do. Anyways, have a good rest of your week, and as a little sneak peek, a few words from Jay and Pax regarding their costumes for Halloween.
          	
          	Jay: Oho? The metal arm? Sure, it took a while, and the black fur dye took a while. Finding the outfit was pretty easy, though. Oh? And the two tales? That was just part of the character I had to go along with.
          	
          	Pax: Rawr!

PunkShifts2099

Recently, I made Chapter 6 of Jay and Pax, but due to it being rushed, I'm going to re-work it later. Chapter 7 should be out by the end of the week, and the updated version of Chapter 6 will be out a little while later. It will be quite different as I had run into an "author's block", but rest assured, it shall be better. If there is anything I should not change, let me know. However, some things will not change. They'll go to the diner, the conversation with Marcus WILL happen, but not on those regards. The park scene will be removed, and there will be more details. Sometimes, you just need to remember why you're writing a book. For me, I was doing it to express my little space and big side through Jay and Pax. I hope everyone will remember why they do the things they do. Anyways, have a good rest of your week, and as a little sneak peek, a few words from Jay and Pax regarding their costumes for Halloween.
          
          Jay: Oho? The metal arm? Sure, it took a while, and the black fur dye took a while. Finding the outfit was pretty easy, though. Oh? And the two tales? That was just part of the character I had to go along with.
          
          Pax: Rawr!

little-Duru

Do you plan to continue your story? Please continue, it's progressing beautifully.

little-Duru

@little-Duru So that they can trust each other more easily in future major events.
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little-Duru

@PunkShifts2099 Unfortunately, I don't think I can offer any suggestions because my imagination isn't very developed when it comes to big events. Personally, I'd rather proceed slowly, as it is for now, so that some stability can be established.
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PunkShifts2099

@little-Duru I absolutely do. I'm looking for ways to keep it interesting. Any suggestions? I've been trying to find filler chapters to lead up to bigger things.
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