Qillmeplease

Chapter 2 is finally out, I poured all my skills and ideas into this chapter, I'd be happy if you passed through it, It's probably one of the most important chapters of my work.
          	
          	By the way, it contains trauma and stuff, so if you're sensitive to these topics, be aware.
          	
          	Bye, see you until Ch. 3 
          	
          	:)

Qillmeplease

Chapter 2 is finally out, I poured all my skills and ideas into this chapter, I'd be happy if you passed through it, It's probably one of the most important chapters of my work.
          
          By the way, it contains trauma and stuff, so if you're sensitive to these topics, be aware.
          
          Bye, see you until Ch. 3 
          
          :)

Qillmeplease

For anyone interested, Chapter 2 will drop around tomorrow or this weekend, This chapter will be very different from the first (This is the real beginning).
          
          I have invested a lot of time and emotion into this chapter especially (Actually, more than two months, wow)
          
          See you until then.
          
          :)

YasharZA

Hey,
          I really liked your first chapter. One thing I didn’t want to mention in the comments was that you need to pay a bit more attention to grammatical errors and some tiny mistakes like “an elbow”. Try to re-read the chapters several times to fix them before posting them. Other than that, the story itself is very intriguing and waiting for the next chapters.

Qillmeplease

@ YasharZA  Thx! Appreciate it :D
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