Looking back at the Trapped Souls AU, I think I'm going to make some adjustments; like giving Samson his own short chapter at the start akin to Randy's, and actually splitting the Aftermath chapter into three parts.
Having the Aftermath chapter the way it is now feels somewhat rushed, like jumping directly into "and now everything's fine" part of the story. I want to actually take some time on the recovery part of Randy, Samson, and Melissa, along with their doubts..
Probably overthinking all of this, but I think it'd help the story run a bit smoother.