RS-MMFFs-ENG

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          	Harem dance
          	
          	Chapter 1
          	
          	Rain bounced into the streets, plunging the big city into a veil of grey colors. The splashing of water, on the paved paths, was hard to overhear and those who didn't have to was not out today. It was not only wet but also cold and windy. Even in this greyish fog, the buildings still seemed ostentatious and majestic, but none of this surpassed the castle of the Highlord of the vampires. The castle towered into the sky in a uniform grey, like a golden sanctuary.
          	Tired, the girl turned her gaze through the rain to the vast compound, which was behind a stately wall and formed the middle of the golden city. The cold rain was pouring into her skin, but since her body had run out of heat, it could no longer take it from her. Her facial expression was fateful. Still, the cold in her bones made her create and she trembled all over her body without being able to prevent it.
          	"Don't junk", shouted a raucous voice and she was pulled forward at a rope that tied her hands together. Her bare feet plundered into the water, which had already gathered into small rivers and flowed across the uneven streets. The stones were slippery and so she had to try not to lose balance while stumbling after the other women.
          	They were all driven by the rain and no one was paying attention to them. The red hair stuck to her back and the simple linen dress offered no protection whatsoever. It was stupid of these people that they handled their merchandise like that. Not all would survive the ordeal. The palace walls were getting closer and closer and the young girl was already looking forward to the warmth that awaited her, but at the same time was afraid of what was coming her way.
          	
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RS-MMFFs-ENG

Preview:
          Harem dance
          
          Chapter 1
          
          Rain bounced into the streets, plunging the big city into a veil of grey colors. The splashing of water, on the paved paths, was hard to overhear and those who didn't have to was not out today. It was not only wet but also cold and windy. Even in this greyish fog, the buildings still seemed ostentatious and majestic, but none of this surpassed the castle of the Highlord of the vampires. The castle towered into the sky in a uniform grey, like a golden sanctuary.
          Tired, the girl turned her gaze through the rain to the vast compound, which was behind a stately wall and formed the middle of the golden city. The cold rain was pouring into her skin, but since her body had run out of heat, it could no longer take it from her. Her facial expression was fateful. Still, the cold in her bones made her create and she trembled all over her body without being able to prevent it.
          "Don't junk", shouted a raucous voice and she was pulled forward at a rope that tied her hands together. Her bare feet plundered into the water, which had already gathered into small rivers and flowed across the uneven streets. The stones were slippery and so she had to try not to lose balance while stumbling after the other women.
          They were all driven by the rain and no one was paying attention to them. The red hair stuck to her back and the simple linen dress offered no protection whatsoever. It was stupid of these people that they handled their merchandise like that. Not all would survive the ordeal. The palace walls were getting closer and closer and the young girl was already looking forward to the warmth that awaited her, but at the same time was afraid of what was coming her way.
          
          Interested? we need help to translating/correct the story.