@RandomGirl9012 - Hey! I just finished reading your story Secrets in Smoke — gotta say, that title is so eye-catching! I actually came across it while scrolling through TikTok on my For You Page, and after seeing your edits and snippets, I knew I had to add it and read it. Let me just say — it was definitely worth it, girl!
I’ve never read a Fast & Furious fanfic where Brian O’Conner is the love interest, but wow — through Catalina’s point of view, you describe her emotions in such a raw and pure way. The detail and beauty in your writing are something you don’t often see in other stories. It’s extraordinary in all the right ways.
Their relationship isn’t easy — they’re both scared — and it’s so heart-clenching to read. I love their back-and-forth banter, the flirting, the teasing… ahhh, it’s dreamy and addictive! I also love the sisterly bond you show between Mia and Catalina, and even Dom being his overprotective self made me smile. Don’t even get me started on all the teasing Mia and Letty do — it’s hilarious! Honestly, I’d love to see them turn the tables on Brian for once.
And OMG, let’s talk about Vince! When I was reading those scenes with Cat, Vince, and Brian, you had me screaming at my phone like, “WHAT?! No way!” I can’t wait to see how their date goes, though it’s going to hurt when she finds out Brian’s a cop.
I’m also super curious — will Cat be joining in on any of their heists or maybe get caught up in one? How would Brian react if she got hurt? And are you planning to include 2 Fast 2 Furious or Tokyo Drift in your story? Maybe Cat will make some appearances or have firsthand experiences in those plots?
It sucks that it’s only going up to Part 7, but honestly, whatever you do, I know it’s going to be amazing. Can’t wait to read the next chapter!