RavensHeartFlame
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After very recent feedback(constructive in a way that I made noticeable mistakes that I can't ignore), I'll be fixing up these chapters before publishing out of concern of continuing these mistakes. I've been a bit repetitive and contradictory on details, so I'll be fixing those to smooth things out.
And possibly, finding an editor or something? Idk, but I'll post today what I've got regardless and then move on to re-editing those mistakes.
Ohiostars
The best TVD book I’ve ever read!! And it’s not even completed yet lol
RavensHeartFlame
@Ohiostars you're so kind, thank you It's been a fun learning experience! I appreciate the reminder how readers enjoy it.
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RavensHeartFlame
Writing on 3 Immortal Hearts chapters, gonna check over the flow of posted chapters and make sure that nothing is out of order.
Maybe some edits, but working on more to post early January!
RavensHeartFlame
@siriusj251 hi! Thank you for checking in, it means a lot. ❤️ I'm unhappy to share i had some bad luck with totalled car, everyone walked away ok and safe thankfully, and new job in January, so back burner. However! Before sharing. I needed to more certain, but March will be a better month for me to post! Im just a bit delayed on writing time. I left off same place and I'll pick back up easily. But yeah, I needed to be sure before announcing anything. I am bad at communicating this but yeahhh.
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siriusj251
Hi! Just wanted to check in to see if you are doing okay! Hope you are and can’t wait for the next chapter!! One of my favorite books!
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TouchTheSky-BeBrave
I think some of the chapters of Immortal Hearts are out of order?
RavensHeartFlame
@TouchTheSky-BeBrave I appreciate ya! Which ones stood out as out of order?
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TouchTheSky-BeBrave
Yeah it’s a little wonky, but that doesn’t make your writing any less fun
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RavensHeartFlame
@TouchTheSky-BeBrave oh, ill look over it! Wattpad gets weird sometimes when updating etc.
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heretospillsometears
hii, just wanted to stop by and ask you if you are interested in reading my enzo fanfic! the latest chapter is up if you want to give it a look!
https://www.wattpad.com/1586520261?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=heretospillsometears
RavensHeartFlame
Wanted to check in and send out a reminder that Immortal Hearts has adult themes in the story. Since we're closing in on the main character meeting the brothers in not too far ahead chapters; there will be heat, romance, and smut eventually.
I write kind of emotionally detailed stuff. So, it's to be expected I will write all emotions and sensual moments in detail.
Note: I will mark the chapters alongside the titles with a "*". So, you can skip the chapters, and I'll even mark when it starts and ends within the chapters in case.
Just a courtesy message if any successfully see this post!
RavensHeartFlame
Working on the next chapter, and boy will it bring in new elements, and familiar characters, as Ravenna finally sets her eyes on Whitmore.
...and what lies there. Playing a bit with some elements here, mixing up canon somewhat, but some things will play out a bit differently regarding certain characters there.
And discovering some secrets.
RavensHeartFlame
One thing I really enjoy is debating character alignments—hero, villain, or anti-hero.
For Ravenna, I aim for the anti-hero archetype with strong heroic tendencies. She has a complex moral compass, yet she still holds to a personal moral code—she feels guilt, empathy, and an awareness of right and wrong. However, she doesn’t follow rules or systems; her morality is deeply personal, not institutional.
“Villain” doesn’t fit her—she’s too self-aware and too compassionate, even when she tries to hide it.
Ravenna does what needs to be done, even when it’s morally messy. She isn’t afraid to get blood on her hands if it means protecting someone or stopping something worse. That’s what firmly places her in anti-hero territory: her actions may seem dark, but her intentions aren’t malicious.
Her driving forces are duty, protection, and redemption—not ego or domination. She doesn’t crave power for its own sake; she bears it. That burden defines her choices. To outsiders, she might look like a villain, but her actions come from necessity or pain.
Right now, she exists in an emotionally complex space—she wants to do the right thing but no longer believes the world rewards goodness. So, she acts according to her own rules, even if others fear or misunderstand her.
As her story continues toward healing and reconnection, she could shift closer to a hero alignment—though a reluctant one, the kind who rolls her eyes at being called a savior. But if she’s betrayed or loses her sense of purpose, she could just as easily slide toward the anti-villain path—someone with noble goals but ruthless methods.
And as for the Marvel characters she’d be closest to? We’ll find out along the way—but let’s just say they fit right within that same anti-hero archetype.
RavensHeartFlame
Ha! Anti-Villain? No, meant to say Anti-Hero. But wouldn't that be a fascinating version of her.
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RavensHeartFlame
Chapters "Change of Plans" and "Interaction" are up for Immortal Hearts!
Some of what I had already, but needed love and care. Next the other five chapters I have unfinished and roughly written out messily. DX
RavensHeartFlame
Moving things along in the story: Immortal Hearts: Klaus is closer to Mystic Falls return!