Hey, Any criticism you can offer me would be appreciated, don't be afraid to pick my works a part. I am an English Major pursuing my Masters. For as long as I can remember, I loved to draw and write, and began my first substantial written work when I was sixteen. Perhaps one day I'll see something of mine published, but for now, I would love for anyone to help me out by telling me what is rubbish about what I write. There is always room for improvement. 

Otherwise, I am obsessed with cats, chocolate, and Kraft Dinner as well as the band Bring Me The Horizon, which inspires a lot of my stories through their music. Other bands I like are Disturbed, Breaking Benjamin, RED, Nirvana and Metallica.  As you can tell by my name, I am a bit of an introvert, but I would like to turn this around, which is half the reason I am putting a work out there to be criticized.

 I hope you enjoy my stories!