Deynamill22

Hi Author,
          
          I read your story today and really enjoyed it you write beautifully, and the way you described each scene was amazing. Keep it up, you have my full support!
          
          I’m also passionate about art and often create commission-based pieces. If you’d like, I’d love to share my work with you and even create something inspired by your story.
          
          You can reach me here:
          
          Email: freyamill13@gmail.com
          
          Discord: freyamill
          
          Instagram: freyamill13
          
          Best,
          Deynamill

freddydiamondsosa

Hi! Sorry to bother you, I'm not a native English speaker, but I wrote a one-shot aimed at an English audience. It is inspired by the tremendism of Camilo José Cela and the existentialism of Carmen Laforet. It's titled: Elegy for The Orphan’s Testament. It's a psychological, dark fantasy and minstery fiction.
          Let me start by saying that I'm not looking for numbers, comments, visuals, or stars, but just people who can tell me if it might be appreciated and if it's well-written.
          Some of my Italian friends, who study languages, appreciated it, but I would like the opinion of a native speaker.
          Would you like to check it out? I hope this message didn't bother you. ❤️