RetroSender

My Toronto Blie Jay's just made the World Series! That's sure gonna interfere with my writing! :)

ProgressStanley3

Hi... sorry for barging in just wondering what you thinknof my new cover... just made it myself

unfinished_sentenc_

Hiii!How are you?I hope fine!
          I'm sorry for bothering you, but do you have time to check out my stories? 
          my biggest dream is to become a great author one day!
          If you are interested, here it is.
          
          
          
          I follow back too for help you because I know it's not easy to be a writer ;)
          https://www.wattpad.com/1577281088?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=unfinished_sentenc_

FilledWithRage

Hello, there. How’s it going?
          
          I know this might be kind of strange/awkward since we haven’t formally met, but would you mind giving me some honest feedback on my story “The City of Lost Souls”? Just a heads up, it’s a bit of a sensitive topic, so if you’re not into that, my book “Legends” is probably my best.
          
          I can also give you feedback on one of your stories as well (preferably a shorter one in the works, opposed to a long one that is already complete), but I know not everyone is into the whole “read 4 read” thing. 
          
          If you’re interested, awesome. If not, please be respectful and simply don’t respond, and leave it at that. I don’t really know any other way to get more feedback on my story other than to just reach out and ask people up front, so yeah...
          
          And if you’re wondering how I found you, like most cases on here it was through mutual followers
          
          Thanks.
          
          - Rage
          

FilledWithRage

Thank you. And I probably mentioned this, but if you spot any small errors, like typos, can you please try to point them out? And I also gave you a follow. Do you mind giving me one back? And I hate to be pushy, but do you mind checking out and subscribing to my YouTube account? I’m attempting to grow my channel. But you don’t have to. I know I’m asking for a lot.
            
            https://m.youtube.com/channel/UC7buIGSHX_iWvQy4rUYrJtg
            
            And you prefer honest feedback?
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RetroSender

I guess give me feedback on SLAVE TO ME
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RetroSender

@FilledWithRage Sure, can do! Ill check yours out right now
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