ElijahNyangu

Hey Rhyming, I just aploaded chapter 5 of " Echo Of Myself" please check it out.

RhymingWizard6

@ElijahNyangu hi I'm back I'll just check it out
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ElijahNyangu

Hey  I just aploaded my work please check them out especially " Echo Of Myself" your feedback we'll be highly appreciated.

RhymingWizard6

@ElijahNyangu hi sorry i was unavailable I had my exams I'll do it now
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ElijahNyangu

And... Do u mind voting for my work?

RhymingWizard6

@ElijahNyangu thankyou, I'll try my best to do the same for you
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ElijahNyangu

@ElijahNyangu thank you so much .. I'll make sure to follow and read your interesting stories and give my support..
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RhymingWizard6

@ElijahNyangu done
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RisingStar_134

Heyy! I actually wanted to ask something if it's okay with you.. Why did you want to post a book though? Like you want to share your story or you want to become an author?

RisingStar_134

@RhymingWizard6 ur welcome! :)
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RhymingWizard6

@RisingStar_134 I'll try to work on my mistakes, thankyou for giving feedback, really needed it.
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RisingStar_134

@RhymingWizard6 First off, sometimes there are sudden shifts b/w Karl's and Serena's povs...it just kinda affects with the reading ig? You can make their separate povs with more descriptions with each of their sides
            Secondly, starting few chapters seem a bit fast paced even though it seems to be a slow burn and many details seemed missing or vague..  
            For example, the story starts with Serena's new day at school but we didn't get to know how it went or how she navigated her starting few days of school life and making friends. We never got to know them later in the story too even though they're mentioned at the start
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NL-JOHN

https://www.wattpad.com/story/402200902?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=NL-JOHN
          Vote for vote? Loved your work

RhymingWizard6

@NL-JOHN sure, thankyou. 
            Btw read yours too it's amazing. 
            Keep going.
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