@pigeons_are_life hello! How are you?? There was no disturbances with you sending me this, I love seeing these types of comments :D so I have finished al the current chapters in your book and on the whole I quite enjoyed it! :) my only critiques would be I think somewhere you said the vamps don’t have emotions yet on multiple occasions there was mention of Krystal emotions (it’s incredibly hard to write devoid of emotion!) and also at the beginning of the book you can see Liam going on a journey from badboy to more ‘civilised’ which gives him a little depth, but Krystal has an incredibly solid storyline and lovely character but like very little motive. Like she goes out to work but she doesn’t work on finding the vamps a way to get home or if she doesn’t really want to go home we don’t know why. But then this might just be because it’s only the first chapters of the book. But other than that it was so good! Loved it :) Have a good day x