Hi, @RinkuG quite a few fans made the same observation you did. They wanted to know what happened that night in order to understand the Blake x Kaley relationship. When making editing suggestions, kept that night in as well as the Blake PoV because Ayla wrote those updates filled with emotion.
No one tells a romantic story as raw with emotion the way she does… ;) Can’t wait for her professionally edited publication to come out…If you are still curious and like romances peppered with #GifPorn try out the edited sample, the original will always be the best version there is <3 AS xoxo