Hey, you commented your story's link in my story's (https://www.wattpad.com/story/407738839-the-noble-life-i-didn%27t-order) chapter. I read your story; the plot's amazing, and I noticed that you've had many people that have advised you. In fact, I have a lot to learn from you.
The only mistake would be your English; that's been pointed out by many people for you too. I checked your latest chapter in the story you asked me to read and one other work of yours, and guess what? Your English is better there. I don't know if you're trying to gain sympathy by saying that you're weak in English or if you did improve your English but are still trying to fake it because you're scared of losing viewers, or maybe it's a genuine mistake.
Well, for my advice, if you write directly on Wattpad with your phone, try to write the chapter in MS Word first; you can proofread it easily before publishing it.
I don't think that advising someone that's already good is of any significance, but since you DID ask me to give my opinion, here you go.
I don't know if you read my work. But I did thank you.