RitikaSaini789

Hello this is author I have recently upload My new store with main character called jungkook.
          	
          	
          	Please have look and share your opinion 

ecli_psecharm

"Hey! I saw your comment on my story’s chapter and you asked for a review, so I checked yours out — really intense and the twists kept me hooked. Some parts were a bit confusing, and I noticed a few grammar mistakes. You could try reading your chapters out loud, using Grammarly, or giving them a careful proofread. Slowing down some scenes and explaining character actions more would make it even better. Overall, love your plot and characters — great job!
          If you like dark, twisty stories, you might enjoy mine too: [Veil of Blood] – [ https://www.wattpad.com/story/407816208?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.openai.chatgpt&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ecli_psecharm
          ]. Not perfect, but perfect enough to keep you hooked… hehe, jk!

RitikaSaini789

@ecli_psecharm I'm happy with your review and i will work on my grammar actually it's not my first Language so and also i would love to read your once
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KORE_BLOSSOMS

Hey, you commented your story's link in my story's (https://www.wattpad.com/story/407738839-the-noble-life-i-didn%27t-order) chapter. I read your story; the plot's amazing, and I noticed that you've had many people that have advised you. In fact, I have a lot to learn from you.
          
          The only mistake would be your English; that's been pointed out by many people for you too. I checked your latest chapter in the story you asked me to read and one other work of yours, and guess what? Your English is better there. I don't know if you're trying to gain sympathy by saying that you're weak in English or if you did improve your English but are still trying to fake it because you're scared of losing viewers, or maybe it's a genuine mistake.
          
          Well, for my advice, if you write directly on Wattpad with your phone, try to write the chapter in MS Word first; you can proofread it easily before publishing it.
          I don't think that advising someone that's already good is of any significance, but since you DID ask me to give my opinion, here you go.
          
          I don't know if you read my work. But I did thank you.

RitikaSaini789

@KORE_BLOSSOMS thanks for your understanding 
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KORE_BLOSSOMS

@RitikaSaini789 I understand; English is my second language too, but I guess I'm a little comfortable with it since I studied in English medium. You're good; despite the language difficulty you're facing, I'm sure you'll improve fast!
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pillowpincess

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I am unsure if user is a robot or not. But user is self promoting their stuff under other peoples stuff and I’m unsure if user actually read the stuff they promote under or are just doing it to make people reading for unpopular fandoms read shit for fandoms that have hundreds of thousands on ao3 and adding to that on wattpad fucking MILLIONS. 
          
          I am unsure if user has private message open but please don’t promote something that probably has 2x-5x more views than the thing you’re promoting it on, thanks!

_taechimmy

Hie, apologize for post it here without permission but I'm a new author. I'm currently writing a JJK ff a cute, fluffy and funny romance. If you are having a bad day, try reading my book to lit up your mood. 
          
          Plot: Jungkook and Y/n are prince and princess who are lovers in their last life. But they got cursed, she died without him by her side and he was guilt for that. 
          
          Now again reborn in modren life, they don't remember anything but their souls did. They don't talk, they argue. He hates how she is funny and childish and she hates him for hating her. 
          
          So, dive into the story to see how her chaos made him fall in love. Here is the story. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401296675?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_taechimmy

_ryswt

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403401911?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=RiyaSawant17
          
          
          I am excited to share my very first story with you. As a new writer, receiving constructive feedback would be very valuable for my development. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take the time to read my work and offer your support and insights ❤️ Thank you so much for your time and consideration!

_ryswt

Thankyou
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RitikaSaini789

@RiyaSawant17 i will take a look probably 
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ultimatejujutsu

 STOP !!
          
          Hello everybody!?
          
           this is the writer or u can say author of this fan-fictional story " imaginary psychopath taehyung" . I want to confirm you that I can't be able to post more episodes till next month because my old phone was being shutdown and I have lost my I'd with that but once I repare I will update with new episode.
          
          Hint of next episode: swan means to die so, someone is gonna loose., gonna shades the blood again.
          
          This is my another account through which I'm message here.
          
          Thanks for your support   
          
          Please be continue..