Hi, RJ. I'm Kori. I've read your work and it seems pretty fine, although I would like to tell you a few things. I noticed that you don't put spaces after commas, and you don't end sentences with periods. For me, it's kind of disturbing, technically because I am a human grammar and spelling checker, but it's fine. We all make mistakes, even me. I just can't help but point out your mistakes. Don't take this badly, though. I just thought it might help you improve, and I hope it will. When you need help, you can message me, I'm always open to help.