RjGonzales5

Read this book on How to summon Creepypastas and Theres a song their you might Wan to listen to
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ShumaiRice

Hi, RJ. I'm Kori. I've read your work and it seems pretty fine, although I would like to tell you a few things. I noticed that you don't put spaces after commas, and you don't end sentences with periods. For me, it's kind of disturbing, technically because I am a human grammar and spelling checker, but it's fine. We all make mistakes, even me. I just can't help but point out your mistakes. Don't take this badly, though. I just thought it might help you improve, and I hope it will. When you need help, you can message me, I'm always open to help.

RjGonzales5

Haha sige sige sa tingin mo puro ako bag tytype ng story ko hahaha yung iba mga pinsan ko kaya mali mali hehehe 
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ShumaiRice

Keep up the good work, besh. Pursue your dream. You're doing a good job.
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ShumaiRice

RESTY ANO MAY GRAMMAR AT SPELLING CHECKED KA NA OH 
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