Rose606Thorne

You know that feeling when someone truly understands what you're trying to create? That's exactly how I feel after getting feedback from The One Brilliant Arc Team on my story. They didn't shy away from the difficult parts of my narrative, praising its "reckoning" and the "raw words straight from my heart."
          	
          	It was incredibly validating to hear them pinpoint the strengths—like how I describe internal experiences in a "visceral" way and how the mother-daughter relationship isn't just a "prop." They truly validated so many aspects I felt good about, like the depth of Serena's internal world and the way the mother-daughter bond feels so real. But then they pushed me to think about where I can go even deeper.
          	
          	They gave me such a clear path forward. We discussed how to bring the "dark" and "fantasy" elements forward much earlier and the importance of giving Serena a concrete desire. I'm honestly so inspired and ready to push this story to its absolute best!
          	
          	If you're interested in connecting with them and perhaps even appearing on their podcast, here's their website: https://www.obaconnect.com/p/tell-your-story

Rose606Thorne

You know that feeling when someone truly understands what you're trying to create? That's exactly how I feel after getting feedback from The One Brilliant Arc Team on my story. They didn't shy away from the difficult parts of my narrative, praising its "reckoning" and the "raw words straight from my heart."
          
          It was incredibly validating to hear them pinpoint the strengths—like how I describe internal experiences in a "visceral" way and how the mother-daughter relationship isn't just a "prop." They truly validated so many aspects I felt good about, like the depth of Serena's internal world and the way the mother-daughter bond feels so real. But then they pushed me to think about where I can go even deeper.
          
          They gave me such a clear path forward. We discussed how to bring the "dark" and "fantasy" elements forward much earlier and the importance of giving Serena a concrete desire. I'm honestly so inspired and ready to push this story to its absolute best!
          
          If you're interested in connecting with them and perhaps even appearing on their podcast, here's their website: https://www.obaconnect.com/p/tell-your-story

pimverse

hi open for v2v?

pimverse

@Rose606Thorne sure i'll vote at lease 15 chapters of you story but please do also leave vote and view on my other story My Destiny
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Rose606Thorne

Yes! You can choose whichever one of my books:))
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