SORYLE2

Chapter 3 of Rended Heart is now updated

dragmetogehenna

hii po! Could you spare me some time po ba? My friend just published her first work here in wattpad po and she's seeking for people with great writing skills and good tastes to give her honest critiques in her story po. If you've got some free time could you help her out po? She would really appreciate it and would be pleased to learn from your opinions po. Pero if wala po kayong time then I would still be glad that you noticed this message and would respect your decision po. Thank you, I'll drop the link here po ^^. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/k1p436UuD9

SORYLE2

@Stalrie_Red hindi ko na maalala hehe peace makakalimotin na ako
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dragmetogehenna

@SORYLE2 thank you so much po, it would be my pleasure to read and support your story po ^^. I would pass this to my friend po, but may I ask po which part she made errors po ba? She just want to edit her mistakes po kasi eh, thank you so much for your time po ^^
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SORYLE2

@Stalrie_Red nabasa ko po ang story and my feedback for her po is parang hindi po siya beginner parang amateur writer but my errors po lahat naman meron ako nga madami thank u dahil pinili mo ako magfeedback sana mabasa niyo din po story ko
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