Salvation5149

Crazy plot of my dream
          	
          	『Plot from my dream』
          	
          	A Duchess,Carrying her old father,And younger sister alone to political battles.
          	
          	White haired guy suddenly put explosives magic in the door on a party, duchess in question accidentally touching it instead of the royal heir.
          	
          	Got exploded but didnt die,But did cut of her body in half,The duchess is begging to be saved but a large rubble toppled her over,Squishing her to death. 
          	
          	But didnt die yet,Turns out she have a immortality bested before her, the other half of her body where its stuck on a rubbles,Regenarating her top,As she quivered in trauma of being squashed to death.
          	
          	Days,Turns into months as she continues to die at hunger and thirst but coming back to life as her body regenerates itself back. 
          	
          	Meanwhile her family... 
          	
          	Is in shambles, the only heir and the younger sister whos only 9 are forced to be in the position,As the father is bedridden due to the trauma,Stress,etc. On witnessing his own daugthers death infront of him.
          	
          	The younger sister who is forced to do the duty of a duchess,Crumbled. The dukedom who is in properity came crumbling when the original duchess "died".
          	
          	The younger sister being stripped from the title of a duchess and her father,Living on a street as the younger sister sell her body to the soldiers,For them to keep living.
          	
          	The duchess however,Cannot escape from the large rubbles,As she destroyed her body trying to get out of them. 
          	
          	As she was about to go insane and loose all her hope,A slight rubbling came outside of the rubbles. After hearing the noise,She quickly took her chance on pushing the rubbles,After many tries. She sucessfully got out. 
          	
          	After getting out,She vows herself to get her life back together and find revenge later on.

Salvation5149

Crazy plot of my dream
          
          『Plot from my dream』
          
          A Duchess,Carrying her old father,And younger sister alone to political battles.
          
          White haired guy suddenly put explosives magic in the door on a party, duchess in question accidentally touching it instead of the royal heir.
          
          Got exploded but didnt die,But did cut of her body in half,The duchess is begging to be saved but a large rubble toppled her over,Squishing her to death. 
          
          But didnt die yet,Turns out she have a immortality bested before her, the other half of her body where its stuck on a rubbles,Regenarating her top,As she quivered in trauma of being squashed to death.
          
          Days,Turns into months as she continues to die at hunger and thirst but coming back to life as her body regenerates itself back. 
          
          Meanwhile her family... 
          
          Is in shambles, the only heir and the younger sister whos only 9 are forced to be in the position,As the father is bedridden due to the trauma,Stress,etc. On witnessing his own daugthers death infront of him.
          
          The younger sister who is forced to do the duty of a duchess,Crumbled. The dukedom who is in properity came crumbling when the original duchess "died".
          
          The younger sister being stripped from the title of a duchess and her father,Living on a street as the younger sister sell her body to the soldiers,For them to keep living.
          
          The duchess however,Cannot escape from the large rubbles,As she destroyed her body trying to get out of them. 
          
          As she was about to go insane and loose all her hope,A slight rubbling came outside of the rubbles. After hearing the noise,She quickly took her chance on pushing the rubbles,After many tries. She sucessfully got out. 
          
          After getting out,She vows herself to get her life back together and find revenge later on.

Salvation5149

Ill rewrite my first story because i felt like i rushed it so much, and i hate it now reading it in my reader's point of view. Ill revision and re write everything. Ill try to salvage and try to revive the story. Because its looking dead right and i dont like reading it now because it was too bland and the plot is all over the place. Ill try to revision it by this december.