Savana Linto

Also, did I mention that their are multiple grammar spelling errors? Probably not, but there are. I've seen many... In separate stories, (many one in each) but I've never seen that many. Not to criticize, but if you don't care about spelling then your not going to get anywhere.
          	  
          	  Sorry to criticize. (But it was necessary, I have major OCD)
          	  
          	  Best regards, Misery-Chan.

I feel like "Tough Love" is a common name for stories that have to do with love and drama. 
          	  
          	  I read the story, were the bolded words meant for chapter separation? Or was that done on purpose? 
          	  
          	  If you were trying to make a Oneshots story or a story in general , you need to publish the first chapter then move on. Or else it's just gonna look weird.
          	  
          	  I'm sorry for my criticism but, I have OCD, it's an organization disorder  (I'm a neat freak) everything needs to be the way it should be, (unless you wanna be unique) or at least the way it was shown to me in the first place, (I have trouble adapting to change).
          	  
          	  Best results, Misery-Chan