Hello, 
My pen name (internet name) is Savannah Chanson, nice to meet everyone. 
I have started writing a story at 2013 (so I am a complete beginner) , but never got the courage to publish anything online even though my friends told me so. Now, i finally got the courage to. I mainly wanted to get feedback from people. so it will be great that you, fellow readers and writers can read my story and tell me what is good and bad. it will be helpful :) 
thank you :)